Monday, October 3, 2011

Wait till Hellen comes

http://www.epd86.org/DLMC/wait.html

If you could become a character in the book and had the power to change one of the events, how would you use your power?
text: Heather slowly put her hand in hellens."youre so cold,Helen," she whispered. "Why are you so cold?"
"Because I am alone, becausenobody loves me." ....
"Promise you'll always love mebest," she whispered fiercfuly.
"But what about daddy?"Heathers eyes filled with tears.  "I can't love you more then I loved him. I can't.

pg. 152-153

After reading this, i can see how Hellen is just trying to get Heather to love her, and nobody else.I likeed the way Heather reacted, when Hellen said that. However I didn't like how Heather still wanted to be with hellen. If i had the power to change this event, i would change it by Heather yelling at Hellen, and telling her that I can't like her more than my own father. In short,this is how i would use my powers to change this event on the story. Heather constantly stands by hellens side, and follows her, but now it was her time to be assertive.

Image DetailI thought it was great book because there was a lot of tention exciment and thrilling scenes

1 comment:

  1. From Hannan- Nice I liked how you used a quote and explained what you thought about that scene from the book. Though you should have gave a little more information about what happened in the book.

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